Rock n' Roll Queen

This is really cute! But my heart wouldn't be able to beat anymore, if It didn't belong to you This is my favorite part. I usually hate poems like this ...

This is an amazing poem that I really connected to & I know other's will be able to as well. In my life you were not a quick phase You ...

I like this a lot. I couldn't help but think of the WWI & WWII when reading this poem. It is gripping and chilling. Scared, shivering, shouting, Sceptical; awaiting a ...

This is really really great! The skies call,The valley sings,The forest whispersSecret things This part was my favorite. I spend a lot of time outdoors, so this really spoke to ...

I have absolutely nothing bad to say about this. Honestly, it's quite amazing. I was hooked on the first line: Brazilian rosewood, back and sides, Hard-Maple top unfinished. Clock ticked ...

I really like this poem. Poems like this usually irk me, because they are overly sappy that I can't help to just role my eyes...(and no..I'm not a jaded girl ...

This was amazing!! It had the perfect amount of suspence, which I loved. I felt like being trapped inside an unknown realm from which there was no escape. My fate ...

Okay, this is very raw and needs some work. For one it's way too bland for my liking. I wanted a little more suspence, and a lot less discription. Although ...

I like this and I see where you were going with it. But you have to hook me with the first sentence. Starting off with: I looked outside the window. ...

Last night the thunder shook me.the hum of the vibrating windowpanes Wonderful my dear! this evoked such an image in my head...mostly because I love storms. Loved your rhythm. It ...

as a child I used to wonder why the night was feared wasn't it the time the stars came out? and the time for the cracked moon to reign? Talk ...

First I am going to compliment your writing skills, because you are a great writer. Raw..but I see the greatness in it. However; I read this and I felt like ...

This is....Great!! No. Wait. Stop. I stop in that quiet street and think at the thought. When will I have a life of my own? I have it already dammit! ...

Okay, first I must say that I really enjoyed reading this. Your first line: There’s a big difference between telling yourself something and actually believing it. Sometimes you don’t realise ...

I actually really really like this! However you did lose me here: Well fuck, he said. And stood up and bent down, scuffling on the hardwood.Thunk-thunk.I’m really sorry, he said. ...